Tuesday, July 22, 2025

The Sacrifice of Roses

 Moonlight Rose Petals 
—Poetry by Joyce Odam and Robin Gale Odam,
Sacramento, CA
—Photos and Original Art by Joyce Odam
 
 
THE FABRICATED MUSE
(Poet and his muse, Omar Khayyam)
—Joyce Odam


Never mind, Old Poet, your dream
still lives,
perfect and unsullied
as any desire
while
tenacious vine
climbs up your musing window
where you lean on your elbow
and sigh
and close your eyes
and sniff the air
and your conjured Muse
still hovers near
like a tiny hummingbird,
but your pen won’t move
and your thoughts won’t clear
though she strokes your dreaming ear
and whispers, write me . . . write me . . .


(prev. pub. in Medusa’s Kitchen, 2/2/21) 
 
 
 
Rosewater
 
 
THE ROSE-EATERS
—Joyce Odam

tonight
we will tear a rose
and devour it
for we are hungry
for certain tastes
and urgencies

we have been
away so long
from
sweet tongues
of the flowers

our lips
will be
pink with flavor
as we smile
through the half darkness
at each other


(prev. pub. in ARX, Sept. l969;
in
The Rose Eaters Mini-Chap, 1972
by Joyce Odam (The Pleiad);
and in Medusa’s Kitchen, 3/25/10; 12/1/15;
11/30/21) 
 
 
 
Gathering
 

FOR ROSES
—Joyce Odam

Thorned, and petaled soft,
the marvel of their scent—
their wonder is enough.

For science and intention,
for all that intervention,
all is moot—

that something of the mind
can alter what is there,
will alter what is truth.

Thorned, and petaled soft—
with lack of scent—how can
the sacrifice of roses be enough.
 
 
 
Blue As In Blues
 

IN THE ALLEY
After Ted Kooser's "In the Alley"
—Robin Gale Odam


within the turning of a day
I saw them sorting through a trash   

no matter of their countenance
by each of them a prize was found

a fragrance drifting from the heap—
the wilting spray of handsome rose

and now with no apology
I write them here, a prize secured

that tender turning of a day—
a sweet bouquet of hidden verse 
 
 
 
Rose Garden, Full Sun
 

THE MEMORY-SCENT OF DRIED
ROSE PETALS
—Joyce Odam

What are roses when they wilt—
wilt and die—scented and soft,
as the softest words to say this—

expensive when alive :
roses for lovers
as token,
as symbol,
perfection without claim—
roses with long green stems,
innocent thorns, warning against touch.

Roses cut from bushes are for sacrifice.
Shrubs cannot hold them against this.
Vases will oblige them—present them.

Single,
or by the dozen,
roses will pose for you with their presence—
admire them,
sigh over them,
take their picture from bud to fullness, to petal-fall,

trash now—
tossed away—given to loss—
leaving a trail of sadness behind them.

                                                
(prev. pub. in Medusa’s Kitchen, 11/19/19; 6/28/22;
10/1/24)
 
 
 
Night Blooming
 
  
WILTING ROSES
—Robin Gale Odam

Twenty synonyms lingering,
every day another woe . . .

Once the scent becomes a sorrow,
a memory, that one phrase of a song,
a fading and featureless image only
in the night . . .

What has become of life, of love . . .

Piano keys, viola strings, the music
score harboring notes of darkness . . . 
 
 
 
Sunbird
 

In broken roses now

we lie among thorns
caress the long stems
and twine among the petals

sweet
sweet smelling
and clinging

they fall like rain from our arms
as we fall
from each other

like
the
roses

so many flounderings
against the
love


—Joyce Odam

                             
(prev. pub. in Medusa’s Kitchen, 4/924)
 
 
 
Wild Flowers, No Breeze
 
  
WHITE FLOWERS
—Robin Gale Odam

She rose into the dark morning
and gave her candle its flame.
She placed it behind the stained glass
hummingbird of lavender
with green wing feathers
and a soft yellow sky.

She dropped a lemon peel
and three ice cubes
into a glass of water.
She dusted her body
with the scent of white flowers
and put on her tiny diamonds
set in white gold.
She sipped the bitter lemon
and stared at the translucent bird
in its yellow sky.
It looked as beautiful as a sunrise.

She knew the day would steal her away.
She would cook oatmeal with raisins
and count lunch money
and remind them all to please 
hang up their wet 
    towels.
She would navigate traffic
and wait for every red light
and her secret would be
that her music was turned up full blast.
She would cling with all her life
to the heavy sound of the drums and the bass
and her heart would pour itself out again.

She would be nine minutes late.
She would accept every task
and turn every way
and do many things at once
and eat crackers for lunch
and forget to breathe
and not stop once until the end.
She would fall through a dream
of traffic and red lights
and a stop at the store
for something she would not remember
and children in the schoolyard
and the five steps to her front door.

She would say she loves them
and remind them to please
pick up their shoes and socks.
She would slide into her old soft gown
and place her diamonds into the red silk box.
She would lean into her feather pillow
and close her eyes for just a moment.
Her sons would blow Pachelbel’s Canon
through their flutes.
Her daughter would draw her a picture
of a wolf with long eyelashes
wearing a saddle and bracelets.
She would not be able to open her eyes.
She would smell the faint scent
of white flowers.
                         

(prev. pub. in Medusa’s Kitchen 12/20/22; 9/3/24)
 
 
 
Sunny Field
 

VERILY, VERILY…
—Joyce Odam

1.
The bride sweeps through the petals
strewn by the girls in pink. The sky
is a gentle blue and later there is a waltz.

2.
The ballroom grows dizzy—
circling and circling within the music,
turning the clinging—lingering waltzers.

3.
There will be dreamy music this night.
It will last until sleep,
like an exhausted lullaby.

4.
But, oh, waltzers—oh, music, dance on.
This adoration will not last.
Something will happen to the perfection.
 
 
 
Time As Timeless
 
 
CHARADE
—Joyce Odam

If a perfect rose is not enough beautifica-
tion for your shoulder what must you lose
of love with its wanting—your long look
down your arm toward the floor, your eyes
so terrible with loss and waiting for the
background to overtake you—what use
memory that saddens and holds—what
use this worrisome glitch of time with its
cutting symbol of mockery. The rose is
beautiful—will wilt. He’s gone.


(prev. pub. in Medusa’s Kitchen, 2/2/21) 
 
 
 
Hybrid


SINGLE ROSE IN BUD VASE
—Joyce Odam

Rose, and echoed rose, single-hued
in mirror-facing windows, where
the twi-lit glass mirrors her rare
garden roses—publicly viewed.
Her Silk Rose now takes all her care.
           
                           
(prev. pub. in Poets’ Forum Magazine, Winter 2008)
 
 
 
Healing Incense
 

Today’s LittleNip:

SYMPATHIES
—Joyce Odam

Meager though the tokens are
I hoard them now.

A paper clip will fit them all :

One letter, and one formal card,
one small note from a shop bouquet.


(prev. pub in

The Muse of Fire, August l997;
and in Medusa’s Kitchen, 11/19/19)


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Our two resident rose-buds, Joyce and Robin Gale Odam, have sent us poems about roses today as we celebrate our Seed of the Week, The Lingering Scent of Roses. Thank you, Joyce and Robin! And thanks to Joyce for all these visuals.

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—Medusa
 
 
 
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