Friday, January 17, 2025

Everyday Surprises

 —Poetry and Photos by Taylor Graham,
Placerville, CA
—And then scroll down for
Form Fiddlers’ Friday, with poetry by
Melissa LeMay, Nolcha Fox, Lynn White,
Joe Nolan, and Stephen Kingsnorth 


THE MOON SPEAKS

Yes, I’m your Moon again tonight,
what you and your kind (Mankind) term
a crescent moon, sliver of moon, saber-
blade moon. Your fickle human languages.
My cycles are more reliable than any
on Earth, since you-all have been messing
with Nature’s lands, waters, atmosphere
for so long. That’s “long” in your
chronography, not in mine. Right now
you can’t even see me for the clouds.
You call me a sliver—like a splinter
in your thumb, or a cat’s claw
or a fingernail paring. Up here so far
above you, I’m as round and alive
as I’ve ever been, and will remain after
you and your kind pass on to your rewards.
 
 
 


ELEGY FOR WHOM   

How can I make you a wild
four-footed Lycidas in the pastoral style
when I don’t know who or what
you were? scattered over last year’s rotting
leaves and early winter’s grasses twining
with vetch months before its bloom—
how Nature brandishes her scythe, her cycles
recycling us all. Walking a morning trail,
I found these signs: part of a rib cage
holding neither breath nor heart, and bones
of one leg (where are the other three,
hoof or paw for touching down to earth?)
I’d guess the long leg of a racer,
a leaper who in each brief bound could fly.
Just moments before, I startled
a doe on the trail, as she startled me
on my walk of finds and losses.
 
 
 
 

WHY DID THE BEAR CROSS THE ROAD?

Before the bear went over the mountain
he stopped by the beehives along the creek
and bear-humming “Honeycomb be my own”
he feasted, golden honey dripping from
his jowls and then he ran across two lanes
of homebound traffic and up the cutbank
into tangles of chaparral and was
way gone over the hills and far away.
 
 
 
 

RAIN MUSIC   

Wiper metronome—
staccato raindrops break free
from clusters of oak.
 
 
 
 

DON’T FENCE ME IN

There’s always music in my head.
Today I’m walking to the beat
of your beloved freedom song,
a favorite at open-mic.

And here I am in stride behind
my dog whose common time is fast
but who can tell the meter? Is
it trot or pace or something else?

Does he have music in his ear?
I wonder as we let the steps
go by like leaves that fall from oaks
in time with seasons of the wind.

We walk a right-of-way between
those horses in their pasture fence
and fields that dream in winter’s sleep,
wide-open country of a song.
 
 
 
 
 
DANCING WITH OTIS

In his mood between repose and zooming
big-dog puppyhood, in the narrow
space between futon and computer table

he weaves himself in 3/4 circles a sort
of waltz around center partner
(me) stroking his sunlit obsidian pelt

his spine arching, tail pluming, eyes
like a child at Christmas and I receive
a gift woven of everyday surprise.

____________________

Today’s LittleNip:

SEASONALS     
—Taylor Graham

flaming bonfire in the stormy woods—
firemen with chainsaws and a match

sweeping storm-fall leaves off the deck—
chimneysweep comes tomorrow

__________________

Taylor Graham writes today about the moon and death, wind and fire, bears and deer and rain, and dancing with her sidekick, Otis. Our thanks to her for her fine pix and poems with their many shades of nature.

Forms TG has used this week include a Persona Poem (“The Moon Speaks”); a Common Time which was written as a response to the reent challenge from Modesto-Stanislas Poetry Center (“Don't Fence Me In”); a Haiku (“Rain Music”); an Elegy (“Elegy for Whom”); and a Nonce Poem that is also a response to last week’s Ekphrastic Challenge from Medusa (“Why Did the Bear Cross the Road?”).
 
TG says her "Common Time" (or '4/4 time") poem comes from the annual MoSt New Year challenge [now closed]. The Common Time is four stanzas of four lines each, syllable count 4, 8, or 12 (she used 8).

TG’s Nonce form, which was one of our Triple-F Challenges last week, goes like this: all lines have the same syllable count; it’s based on a song title or phrase in the first and last line and a line somewhere in between. Feel free to make up your own Nonce poem—no deadlines on any of our challenges.

In El Dorado County’s poetry events this week, Poetry in Motion will NOT meet in Placerville next Monday morning due to Martin Luther King, Jr. Day. El Dorado County’s regular workshops are listed on Medusa’s calendar if you scroll down on http://medusaskitchen.blogspot.com/p/wtf.html/. For more news about EDC poetry—past (photos!) and future—see Taylor Graham’s Western Slope El Dorado Poetry on Facebook at www.facebook.com/ElDoradoCountyPoetry. Or see Lara Gularte’s Facebook page at https://www.facebook.com/groups/382234029968077/. And you can always click on Medusa's UPCOMING NORCAL EVENTS, too (http://medusaskitchen.blogspot.com/p/wtf.html). Poetry is Gold in El Dorado County!  
 
And now it’s time for . . .


FORM FIDDLERS’ FRIDAY!  
 
t’s time for more contributions from Form Fiddlers, in addition to those sent to us by Taylor Graham! Each Friday, there will be poems posted here from our readers using forms—either ones which were sent to Medusa during the previous week, or whatever else floats through the Kitchen and the perpetually stoned mind of Medusa. If these instructions are vague, it's because they're meant to be. Just fiddle around with some challenges—  Whaddaya got to lose… ? If you send ‘em, I’ll post ‘em! (See Medusa’s Form Finder at the end of this post for resources and for links to poetry terms used in today’s post.)


Check out our recently-refurbed page at the top of Medusa’s Kitchen called, “FORMS! OMG!!!” which expresses some of my (take ‘em or leave 'em) opinions about the use of forms in poetry writing, as well as listing some more resources to help you navigate through Form Quicksand and other ways of poetry. Got any more resources to add to our list? Send them to kathykieth@hotmail.com for the benefit of all man/woman/poetkind!


* * *
 
 
 Last Week’s Ekphrastic Photo


Poets who sent responses to last week’s Ekphrastic photo included Melissa Lemay, Nolcha Fox, Lynn White, Joe Nolan, and Stephen Kingsnorth. As spring crawls toward us, so do the birds and the bees
:


EH-OH
—Melissa LeMay, Lancaster, PA

In a flowery field
By a shrubbery wall
Up over the hills
Five multicolored
Beehives sit
On boxy pillars

There is a baby
In the sun—the bees
Are wondering why
Four creatures
That have TV bellies
Keep on walking by

“Eh-oh” they say
While on their way
Equally as confused
If one of them is
Aquamarine—they
Didn’t get the news

* * *

FOR SALE
—Nolcha Fox, Buffalo, WY

Houses on the blocks are getting
too high-priced to buy.
In our modest neighborhood,
millionaires are purchasing
our worn-out homes
and building big high-rises.
Soon I’ll have to sell to them
and move somewhere
where I can see the sky.

* * *

TELLING THE BEES
—Lynn White, Blaenau Ffestiniog, North Wales

Bee hives look pretty in the garden
humming in harmony
each community sweet
as its honey.
But to keep them healthy,
they have to be told what’s going on
in the world around them.
And each hive must be told separately.
The bee community does not include other hives,
the other bee lives.
Honey bees are more akin to The Establishment
than to We The People,
only caring for their own, barely tolerating the rest.

Like us they produce a Leader,
a Queen,
and grow her from her own own
ordinary egg.
Then, she is fed by Workers,
groomed by Carers,
protected by Soldiers.
It’s nurture not nature that makes her queen
and keeps her queen while she is useful.
Then they kill her and breed another
and so it goes
on and on and on
just like with us.

They’re just like us.
That’s what I shall tell the bees.

* * *

ALL ABOUT THE EGGS
—Joe Nolan, Stockton, CA

It’s all about the eggs.

They come and go,

A woman’s got them
All lined up
Since birth.

Dropping down
One by one
Each month.

When they come
Her hormones surge
Bringing on her loving urge
For life
To spring abundant
From life.

When they go
They drag away
Dreams and hopes
Of future days
With babies
Thus surrounded,
Marked by flow of blood.

* * *


GIFT ECONOMY
—Stephen Kingsnorth, Coedpoeth, Wrexham, Wales

No bumbling here, nor overload
defying aeronautic law,
or droning liftoff, barely space,
like hovercraft with excess weight.
For these are workers, organised,
a colony, established ranks,
herbaceous border for their box,
just as their rôle is ordered, ticked.

But they have breeding in their case—
how else on royal household roll?
In pollination-aid to blooms,
and as suppliers for the crèche.
Hive of activity we see—
though not that honeytrap for spies—
in pastel palette, terraced row,
a garden city, detached homes.

I’m buzzing, gift economy,
at what those birds and bees can mean;
for nectar, blooms and honey too
are gifted by sky-woman, earth.
As stewards, youngest in the chain,
so poorly have we yet performed,
as web of mycorrhiza speaks,
the Greenman saving where they can.

Our sweetgrass braids are loaned not owned,
indigenous, of native lands
have learned and known, free-gifted ways—
where’s Jubilee in Palestine?
The Law has failed, as Torah too,
as terror reigns, as rained before,
spread on the floor. Of silent night,
the church may sing, but grief attends.

* * *

Stephen Kingsnorth sent us a Pantoum:
 
 
 braided sweetgrass
 

DRINK DEEP OF NATIVE DRAUGHT
—Stephen Kingsnorth
After reading
Braiding Sweetgrass by Robin Wall Kimnerer

I learn our kind is not alone,   
though claiming peak genetic tree,  
for I am taught that animate    
as key to being, complement.   

Though claiming peak genetic tree,   
’tis sweetgrass, mushrooms, trees I know   
as key to being, complement,
intent of mutual respect.    

’Tis sweetgrass, mushrooms, trees I know,
though not our endowed wider craft—         
intent of mutual respect,
the subject of a wholesome art.    
         
Though not our endowed wider craft—         
in mycorrhiza converse now;         
the subject of a wholesome art,   
lone rangers masked, intend powwow.

* * *

And here is an Ekprastic poem from Stephen, not about bees, but about fleas. It was written a while back In response to a prompt, "Fleas and their trappings" . . .  Stephen also sent the following fine foto of the flea (I'm calling this Steve's Fleas):
 
 

NESTLED
—Stephen Kingsnorth

Captured in the compost crop,
teems of micro, streaming, stealth,
cleansing tilth, best dirt of earth,
ready, spreading, years’ soiled ground.
Gathered seed from jewelled land,
’copters, wing spans, parachutes,
down-wind drones through silent space,
achenes rotting, last term’s fruit;
birds that dropped by, leaving mark,
fleas from cats in nestled grass.

____________________

Many thanks to today’s writers for their lively contributions! Wouldn’t you like to join them? All you have to do is send poetry—forms or not—and/or photos and artwork to kathykieth@hotmail.com. We post work from all over the world, including that which was previously-published. Just remember: the snakes of Medusa are always hungry!

____________________

TRIPLE-F CHALLENGES!
 
See what you can make of these challenges, and send your results to kathykieth@hotmail.com/. (No deadline.) Written any Pantoums lately? Let’s hop on Stephen’s bandwagon (see above) and come up with another one:

•••Pantoum: www.shadowpoetry.com/resources/wip/pantoum.html AND/OR https://poets.org/glossary/pantoum

•••AND/OR how about the prompt Taylor Graham took ahold of (see above) from Modesto, the Common Time:

•••Common Time: four stanzas of four lines each, syllable count 4, 8, or 12

•••See also the bottom of this post for another challenge, this one an Ekphrastic one.

•••And don’t forget each Tuesday’s Seed of the Week! This week it’s “Winds of Warning”.

____________________

MEDUSA’S FORM FINDER: Links to poetry terms mentioned today:

•••Common Time: four stanzas of four lines each, syllable count 4, 8, or 12
•••Ekphrastic Poem: notesofoak.com/discover-literature/ekphrastic-poetry
•••Elegy: https://poets.org/glossary/elegy
•••Haiku: https://www.poetryfoundation.org/learn/glossary-terms/haiku-or-hokku AND/OR www.shadowpoetry.com/resources/haiku/haiku.html
•••Nonce: https://www.writersdigest.com/write-better-poetry/nonce-forms-what-they-are-and-how-to-write-them
•••Pantoum: www.shadowpoetry.com/resources/wip/pantoum.html AND/OR https://poets.org/glossary/pantoum
•••Persona Poem: https://poets.org/glossary/persona-poem
   
__________________

—Medusa
 
 
 
  Today's Ekphrastic Challenge!
 
 Make what you can of today's
picture, and send your poetic results to
kathykieth@hotmail.com/. (No deadline.)

* * *

—Photo Courtesy of Public Domain
 
 
 
 
 














 
 
 
For future poetry happenings in
Northern California and otherwheres,
click on
UPCOMING NORCAL EVENTS
(http://medusaskitchen.blogspot.com/p/wtf.html)
in the links at the top of this page—
and keep an eye on this link and on
the daily Kitchen for happenings
that might pop up
—or get changed!—
 during the week.

Photos in this column can be enlarged by
clicking on them once, then clicking on the x
in the top right corner to come back to Medusa.

Poets’ bios appear on their first MK visit.
To find previous posts, type the name
of the poet (or poem) into the little
beige box at the top left-hand side
of this column. See also
Medusa’s Rapsheet at the bottom
of the blue column on the right
side of this column to find
any date you want.

Miss a post?
You can find our most recent ones by
scrolling down under this daily one.
Or there's an "Older Posts" button
at the bottom of this column.
(Please excuse typos in older posts!
Blogspot has been through a lot of
incarnations in 20 years!)

Would you like to be a SnakePal?
Guidelines are at the top of this page
at the Placating the Gorgon link;
send poetry and/or photos and artwork
to kathykieth@hotmail.com. We post
work from all over the world—including
that which was previously published—
and collaborations are welcome.
Just remember:
the snakes of Medusa are always hungry—
for poetry, of course!
 
Skunkaconda
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 


 

Thursday, January 16, 2025

Soothing the Knot of Never

 Open Sez Me
* * *
—Poetry and Cool Visuals by Smith and Lady Smith,
Cleveland, OH (next to the Zoo)
 
 
Dog's talking to me

Watching talk box
up stairs he's too old to climb
he barks to go out
I comply
coming back in
I grab a candy bar
he gives me his where's mine look
I ignore it
go up
10 minutes later bark
come down
he's standing by the pantry door
where treats are
demanding
I laugh
give him his treat
back upstairs
15 minutes later another bark
down
he's by his bed
in which cat's sprawled
I remove cat
dog gets in

I'm glad we had this talk
he sighs
I go upstairs
again
happy I understood
 
 
 
 Lotus by Lady


Blood of love
in dirt of rebirth
I move in small arcs
with large pains
must be using muscle memory
cuz I'm still moving

Said you're on or off the bus
Taint true
you can be over, under
front, back, both sides
and dimensions in between
and believe me
I been all
be some now
going down this unknown road
with unknown load
pointy sticks stuck in back
as goad

And as for bus go
I don't know
but I'm a-hangin' on
 
 
 
 Duality


I look
I watch
I don't understand

Or maybe do
ole lizard brain and you
took hunger
need
danger
greed
to crawl sea bottom
to land top and not stop

And looks like lizard brain
gonna crawl us right back down
to slime and crowd
of life biting life to survive
in unstrive

Sorta like it never stopped
just got lipstick put on the slop
and called smart

(but not, sings the lark)

O well
buy and sell bye-bye cell
here we a-go-go to lower down woes
stuffin' our pockets
with glop

Hug my body
hug my spirit
hug my whole

Sorry soul
 
 
 
 Fallen Monks


An old guy
white beard
wrinkled grin
long educated in things above me
said it's sad
that after decades of learning
all he had to offer
was "be kinder to each other"

Feral kitten adopted us
never been hit
expects love
gives love
(and loveclaw)
pretty basic stuff

folk around the world
hating millennia
kill still

I for eye
lid for lid
no matter lie
STUPID
 
 
 
6 feet


The gripes of wrath
social aftermaths
bite my ass
pay a pig a day
and capitalism still
won't go away
but hey
what can I say
it's the way
I have spoken
ofttimes token
ain't jokin'
jive 'n strivin'
for the livin'
not the dyin'
keep on tryin'
not to lie
as I pry
tug at why
in magic try
of sun
and moon
and sky
no one home
but hope alone
 
 
 
 Function/Junction


The city seeps
juices
uses
cries cross hill
for creatures of will
and won't
but I don't answer

All you got
is you
your honor
your corner
your cancer

Outside horror
normal
day one
to day done
eat must eat
cheat must cheat
got us out of the ocean
into the trees
down to the penthouse

Their rent rends
they tent trends
to bad ends

All we got
is our corner spot
to soothe the knot of never

Grab a chair
glad you're here
well come to my corner

We'll raise our thumbs
to the dumb someones
humping money fever
 
 
 
 Walkline


Hey U S of A
slick sick list here
not one you want to be
number one on
nine times world wide

#Total Crimes
*Rape
*CO2 Emissions
*Divorce Rate
*Teen Birth Rate
*Heart Attack
*McDonald's Restaurants
*Plastic Surgery
*Prisoners

Lotta sad seeping down
cuzza bad wearing crowns

Steal enough
they make you a king
guess it's always been a thing
the strong in force
but weak in heart and mind
are usually unkind
history finds

No mystery here
good with bad cannot cohere
cuz paths diverge
in different woulds
that end in flesh
or cinder

Which will will we
I wonder
 
 
 
 Was maybe


Aaahhh the easing of the pressure
of holding myself together
in this hellish whether

take another toke

ain't no joke
weed eases bleed of bad
but baby bad abounds
in hounds
of Capitalistic Hell

nothing new
the many used by few
never told true
killing you
and me
for free

they cheat their mothers
screw their brothers
as for the others
they're meat
to beat
eat

but as bad gets badder
thoughts of maybe better
perk
perhaps early work
in getting jerks jailed
for forbiddances
and fails

evil's empowered
bad guys in the tower
no other way to put it

didn't have to happen
doesn't have to be

depends
as always
on you and me

what's it gonna be?
 
 
 
 Shangri-la


Today’s LittleNip:


"I've got to go downstairs
and take the laundry upstairs"
said Sisyphus to his wife.

"Don't drop it" she cackled.


—Smith

__________________

As our Seed of the Week says, I hear the Winds of Warning—this time from Smith (Steven B. Smith)—with today’s “gripes of wrath” as we start out the new year with, not sour grapes, but cogent ones. May the year of 2025 see cracks of light in this dark wall looming over, under, around and between us. As Smith says, “depends/as always/on you and me”. 
 
And our condolences to Steven and Kathy on the passing of their pooch. Helluva way to start a year…

—Medusa
 
 
 
 2 by Lady
—Photo by Smith of
Paintings by Kathy (Lady) Smith








 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
A reminder that
Amanda Hawkins & Mischa Kuczynski
will read in Davis tonight, 7pm.
For more info about this and other
future poetry happenings in
Northern California and otherwheres,
click on
UPCOMING NORCAL EVENTS
(http://medusaskitchen.blogspot.com/p/wtf.html)
in the links at the top of this page—
and keep an eye on this link and on
the daily Kitchen for happenings
that might pop up
—or get changed!—
 during the week.

Photos in this column can be enlarged by
clicking on them once, then clicking on the x
in the top right corner to come back to Medusa.

Poets’ bios appear on their first MK visit.
To find previous posts, type the name
of the poet (or poem) into the little
beige box at the top left-hand side
of this column. See also
Medusa’s Rapsheet at the bottom
of the blue column on the right
side of this column to find
any date you want.

Miss a post?
You can find our most recent ones by
scrolling down under this daily one.
Or there's an "Older Posts" button
at the bottom of this column.
(Please excuse typos in older posts!
Blogspot has been through a lot of
incarnations in 20 years!)

Would you like to be a SnakePal?
Guidelines are at the top of this page
at the Placating the Gorgon link;
send poetry and/or photos and artwork
to kathykieth@hotmail.com. We post
work from all over the world—including
that which was previously published—
and collaborations are welcome.
Just remember:
the snakes of Medusa are always hungry—
for poetry, of course!
 
Dog's still talkin'...

 


 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

Wednesday, January 15, 2025

Footprints in the Snow

 —Poetry by Michael Lee Johnson,
Downers Grove, IL
—Public Domain Photos 
Courtesy of Michael Johnson 


TRAIL OF TEARS IN THE SNOW
 
Footprints in the snow, fresh.
Will your divorce lawyers talk
to Jesus this night—
set me chain-free.
Set you on your traveling ways.
Searching, we'll both be curiously searching.
Even hell has its standards burn with grace—
jukebox baby, we'll meet again
in the end, in that big black box.
Jesus suffers with the poor and the lost.
Jesus is the lead tempo rubato

4 both of us now bounce around
robbed of our stolen time.
Let me drive you home for the last time.
Coming home to go on separate paths.
Footprints fresh in the snow, 2 paths
forked off in different directions.
Hear diverse sounds—
on the FM radio, our favorite tune,
with age, it will become a classic
'Sympathy For the Devil,' The Stones,
jukebox, baby, put another quarter in.
 
 
 

 
OLD FIDDLE MAN
 
Old daddy man
playing fiddle man
in a family youth band.
He was the star.
Crowds paid & rushed
through that door, dancing
clapping to hear a few slim notes
for just transitory seconds
a few brief notes only
realizing the ephemeral
rhythm man before he died.
Dance, dance, dance,
fiddle man past midnight
tonight, he lost his bow.
83 years old, arthritic fingers
World War 2 man
scally cap, cheese cutter cap—
dipped-down cap.
83-years-old fiddle man.
Thornwood Restaurant & Lounge.
 
 
 

 
JUST ANOTHER POET
 
Just another poet.
There will always be
another poet to take my place.
In the pillars of heaven & pits
of hell is a particle of those passed.
Beliefs of Muslim burial with honors
in the sea within hours of death.
Hindu cremation in the Ganges River witnesses  
a transparent
yet raw ritual filters floating dead bodies upside
down.
The smell of fish at dinner was so inviting,
that scent of the stench of human flesh rotting &
death not so much.
Christians offer prayers at the cross of faith
to raise the poets of merit up from the grave.
Einstein's physical formula is confused
as he works on this issue of master poets
near his grave; echoes haunt past & present;
he loved so many different women in private,
you know.
An online poetry encyclopedia stretches
out pages that best begin to end.
Clay tablets, the Epic of Gilgamesh
Mesopotamia, parchment bits pieces,
yellow padded paper, those restaurant napkins,
scribbled—AI-generated digital design converted
fakes.
Ultimately, time guarantees an unfashionable death
stamp.
Poets, notices, and rituals are all gone from here
undefined.
End this mirror of me, no intellectualism mixing
with Jesus' imagination.
Who are the poetry warriors who rest best on the
pillows of gold & silver,
yawning dreams, stubbornness with pain? 
Dimly lit, no memory, no response.
 
 
 

 
IN MY WILL
 
In my will, there will be a pinball machine.
A renovated jukebox from American Pickers,
a cable TV show. For the taverns, bars,
and basements of fun seekers for those
who long to be free and ferocious.
I no longer fear death.
Empty vodka bottle by my bed.
A dusty Bible underlined
Jesus’ messages
in red.

____________________

Today’s LittleNip:


I’m not afraid of death; I just don’t want to be there when it happens.

—Woody Allen

____________________

—Medusa, with thanks to Michael Lee Johnson for today’s fine poetry!
 
 
 
Michael Lee Johnson























For future poetry happenings in
Northern California and otherwheres,
click on
UPCOMING NORCAL EVENTS
(http://medusaskitchen.blogspot.com/p/wtf.html)
in the links at the top of this page—
and keep an eye on this link and on
the daily Kitchen for happenings
that might pop up
—or get changed!—
 during the week.

Photos in this column can be enlarged by
clicking on them once, then clicking on the x
in the top right corner to come back to Medusa.

Poets’ bios appear on their first MK visit.
To find previous posts, type the name
of the poet (or poem) into the little
beige box at the top left-hand side
of this column. See also
Medusa’s Rapsheet at the bottom
of the blue column on the right
side of this column to find
any date you want.

Miss a post?
You can find our most recent ones by
scrolling down under this daily one.
Or there's an "Older Posts" button
at the bottom of this column.
(Please excuse typos in older posts!
Blogspot has been through a lot of
incarnations in 20 years!)

Would you like to be a SnakePal?
Guidelines are at the top of this page
at the Placating the Gorgon link;
send poetry and/or photos and artwork
to kathykieth@hotmail.com. We post
work from all over the world—including
that which was previously published—
and collaborations are welcome.
Just remember:
the snakes of Medusa
are always hungry—
for poetry, of course!
 
Snakeprints in the snow~
 
























Tuesday, January 14, 2025

Tower of Words

 Corsage
* * *
 —Poetry by Joyce Odam and Robin Gale Odam,
Sacramento, CA
—Photos and Artwork by Joyce Odam
 
 
HURRY
—Robin Gale Odam

Listen to the music—oh no, oh no,
oh no,
in the background—can’t you
hear . . . over there, in the background,
in the script . . . it’s in the script! It’s in
his eyes! Why can’t you hear . . . the
credits are beginning to roll, listen!
Hurry!
                            

(pre . pub. in Medusa’s Kitchen, 4/11/23) 
 
 
 
Promise Kept In Black And White
 
  
WEDDING
—Joyce Odam

After“The Wedding” by June Jordan


They are caught in the long drift down together—
they are caught—trembling like two leaves in
a gold wind—warm in the light. They shine.
They almost love. They are caught in the
long drift down. They flutter softly to
the music—graceful and slow, as if
there was only this sweet falling—
no tree to memorize—no earth
to fall to—no grief to know.

                                                     
(prev. pub. in Medusa’s Kitchen, 4/12/22; 10/18/22)
 
 
 
The White Jar
 

THE USE OF THESE SORROWS
—Joyce Odam

What is the use of these sorrows if not to spend
them on
you, my poor dear love—gone crazy at last, your
life spent
on tawdry performances?

Oh, I have accompanied you on the best of these.
The length of love is not long enough to tell of it.
We broke the mirrors more than once with our eyes.

Now you stare beyond me and I look away from
you. How
sad we are, finally—two derelicts devoid of any
true emotion, this we tell each other in our dry
voices.

But I have brought you a poem made of the old
words we
used to say. See how I have fixed it into a particu-
lar eloquence of ruined light and the shadow it
casts for innuendo.

                                                                        
(prev. pub. in Medusa’s Kitchen, 10/20/20)
 
 
 
All At Once
 
 
BIPARTISAN
—Robin Gale Odam

should it be told
not a handshake nor a nod
but the faint flicker inside the eye 
 
 
 
Promises
 
 
THE POET’S WIFE
—Joyce Odam

She came to the door,
night-eyed, witch-haired,
and whispered,
“My poet is locked in his tower.
No one disturbs his twenty-third hour.”

“How did you meet him?”
we asked her. She smiled.
“He composed me one day
when he was drunk on rhyming.
He liked my sound and metaphor.
I liked his timing.”

“Oh, what are your children doing?”
we shuddered.
She shrugged. “They are cutting out words
from what we say, doing research
for their father.
But he throws their adjectives away—
why do they bother?

“Will you show us your forest-garden,”
we flattered.
But she warned, “Something heavy
is in the air. No one can breathe what’s growing.
The night is sick with molding green.
And I am sick with knowing.”

“Will you tell him we came…” but whirlpools
moved in her moody eyes,
and she
was already climbing her husband’s stair,
taking key-shaped pins
from her struggling hair.

­                                                     
(prev. pub. in Trace, 1965; My Stranger Hands, 1967;
Wagon & Star, 1967; Medusa’s Kitchen, 8/7/18;
4/11/23; 7/23/24) 
 
 
 
Songful
 
 
ANNA’S SONG
—Joyce Odam

(After Anna Akhmatova)


So what that I write about grief
—grief and melancholy,

when this is what I live with,
those old foes that know me

intimately
—love me even.

How we carouse and commiserate
late into the year,

or night,
feeling sorry for ourselves,

and each other.
How else get through the life

on balance,
on cue, our timing perfect

—perfectly guarded to whatever
assails us

—every ship that sinks
and fills the sea with mourners.


(prev. pub. in Medusa’s Kitchen, 10/20/15; 10/20/20)
 
 
 
Secretive
 
 
DARKNESS
—Robin Gale Odam

She kept secrets. . .
a sweet ride
parked in the shadow
of a dream,
a fishing line
made of pure
desire,
more words
than she would
ever speak,
a soft heart,
a droplet of
cool venom,
and darkness to match
his own.

        
(prev. pub .in Brevities, April 2014;
and Medusa’s Kitchen, 6/6/23) 
 
 
 
Through Glass Darkly
 

LYRIC
—Joyce Odam

When I was the one, the first holy one,
of my other being; when I knew myself,
and the way of myself
and out of longing for myself,
and there was no other,
and even then I sought,
and my own blood was flowing,
and I bled until I was pure of my bleeding,
and this was God in my pleading,
and I answered,
and was ever fated to ask and answer
and still I complained of my prayer
and my conviction,
and I went to the tower of words
and it was a mountain
and it leaned into the falling sky
and even then I signified nothing
for a moment,
for a long, powerful moment,
and was united with my birth
long after I died,
and thus I cried and cried
for myself and others
and nothing came to me
except my ego which was made of words
made of thoughts, and they entangled.
Oh, why do I remember this?
It was all done before it began,
and I was diminished.
My tears drained me and I was a river  
pouring down a mountain in the eyes of God.

                                              
(prev. pub. in Medusa’s Kitchen, 12/31/19; 2/13/24)
 
 
 
Sleepless
 

LIGHTHOUSE
—Joyce Odam

If I were the sea
I would use you for a focal point :
your light for my darkness;

I would use you for a boundary
to gauge my edge against;
I would know where I could test
my calm and fury,
let my ships beware,
warn my whales,
and give your shore-gulls praise
for marking stormy skies
with their whiteness.

I would always know where you are
so I could ever surge toward you
with my lonely power.


(prev. pub. in Poetry Now (Sacramento), May 2009;
and Medusa’s Kitchen, 5/29/12; 12/31/19; 11/5/24)
 
 
 
Timing
 

A LAST FLOCK OF BIRDS
—Joyce Odam

Behold this sunset—how your eyes love it—
the lowering of light—the lengthening
of shadow—the softening of color,

notice the feel of the air and the sounds
that renew into it, like beginnings
instead of endings,

this was a day you spent without knowing its
cost—but now it has come down to this hour—
and you watch the light go at the horizon,

and you feel the sadness again for each day’s
dying—where are the birds,
you start to ask . . .

and a last dark flock of them flurries up
in silhouette and crosses the sky in the last light
and startles you and you don’t see where they 
settle . . .

                                                        
(prev. pub. in PDQ [Poetry Depth Quarterly], 1998;
and Medusa's Kitchen, 4/9/13; 10/20/20) 
 
 
 
Finer Than That
 
 
DID YOU?
—Robin Gale Odam

Did you wait for me?
Listen for my footsteps?
Feel time
move
through the moment?
Wonder?
Did you sink?
Just a little?
Did you?

           
(prev. pub. in Medusa’s Kitchen, 6/27/23)

___________________

Today’s LittleNip:


DEATH SAID
—Joyce Odam

I will be gentle
I will be thin upon your soul

I will not make you sad or harm you
I will love your life like a flower

I will put your life in my mind
and remember it

and you will be where I am
where I have always promised
                           
___________________

Many thanks to the Odam Poets (Joyce and Robin Gale) today for fine poetry and Joyce’s visuals to go with it, as they muse on the Seed of the Week, “Before I Knew Better”.

Our new Seed of the Week is “Winds of Warning”. Send your poems, photos & artwork about this (or any other) subject to kathykieth@hotmail.com. No deadline on SOWs, though, and for a peek at our past ones, click on “Calliope’s Closet”, the link at the top of this column, for plenty of others to choose from. And see every Form Fiddlers’ Friday for poetry form challenges, including those of the Ekphrastic type.

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